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Bye Bye Beautiful,
Are the words I'm thinking now.
I'll get them out,
Just don't know how.

I'm leaving you,
This thing isn't working.
I tell you how I feel,
You stand there, smirking.

I thought you were the woman,
I'd spend forever with.
I seriously loved you,
But I guess it was just a pith.

My heart is wrenching,
I'm sure you're just fine.
I was in the wrong,
To ever call you mine.

I'll never love,
Another one like you.
And if I do,
I'm going to sue.
:iconvampiremistress100:

Author's Comments

From the point of a guy's view.
David was listening to a song called Bye Bye Beautiful, and so this came out!
Ending is gay, enjoy xD
Fourth tonight! Two more pages left in notebook!

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:icontypically-insane:
wow,
i really enjoyed this.
written beautifully.
:iconvampiremistress100:
Aw, thank you so much!

--
Love dies,
Friends leave.
But you'll always have anime,
Up your sleeve.
:iconvampirate726:
Interesting write, I like how you made it from the guy's point of view. You're right about the ending though, I'm not too fond of the "sue" bit. Other than that, I really liked it - good job.

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:icongrelae:
I like all of it but the ending. xD Good job.

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:iconfox-spirit12:
I really like all of it. The ending made me laugh. And I seriously needed a laugh right about now.

--
Because in all of the whole human race Mrs. Lovett,
there are two kinds of men and only two!
There's the one staying put in his proper place,
and the one with his boot in the others ones face!
:iconvampiremistress100:
Yeah, makes me laugh too xD
Thank you.

--
Love dies,
Friends leave.
But you'll always have anime,
Up your sleeve.
:iconvampiremistress100:
xD
I love the ending, I find it funny.

--
Love dies,
Friends leave.
But you'll always have anime,
Up your sleeve.
:iconvampiremistress100:
xD It rhymed, and I think it's a nice little laugh to get rid of the sadness.
And thank you <3

--
Love dies,
Friends leave.
But you'll always have anime,
Up your sleeve.

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